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Monday, February 4, 2013

unfolding night and you ...

I don't claim the sweet control
to speak in sacred tongues
but prove me with your quiet wish
 
until night is not enough
and the moon taps upon my window
the secret of loving you.
 
 
 
 

14 comments:

  1. This is so beautiful ... loved it !!!

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  2. Wow! You may not claim the sweet control to speak in sacred tongues but obviously you do! This is umm, umm good!

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  3. Beautiful, yes there is a secret to loving some people if they will let you into their hearts.
    xoxoxo ♡

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  4. Ah, that moon. She sees so much....and knows more. Lovely.

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  5. dearest dianne - you are so right. it is hard for some people to let others in. thank you.

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  6. chantel- hello. thank you for the comments on this poem.

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  7. "until night is not enough",,, I like those words and the whole as well,,, speaks to the senses,,:-)

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  8. hi ellecee: how are you? thank you! x

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  9. Oh Paige, this really captures for me, the ecstasy of wanting. We so often think of the joy in desire lying only in fulfillment, but the desire itself is so precious, even as it comes to a head.

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  10. lovely! would you like to follow each other? let me know!

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  11. cammila: hi. so true. desire itself can be a beautiful experience.
    of course, the fulfilment of the desire is heavenly. thank you!

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