the heart understands all the inner parts of your soul... listen.
Ah, very nice! Leading with the heart is brave!
There's some really beautiful aliteration in this poem. Quite lovely writing.~ Miskyhttp://miskmask.wordpress.com/2013/02/17/china-childrenmealtime-at-st-jeromes/
I think this is a pretty amazing love poem...so hard to write, usually so trite.
Like the knots and naked simmering ~
hi tumblewords - thank you!
hi miskmask {love this pen name} thank you.
hi annel - thank you!
hello heaven - nice to hear from you. thank you - i kind of like that line, also.
I love the image of nude limbs braided. Very nice!
Lovely poem, Paige. I would quote a favorite line, but they're all my favorite!
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Lovely creation paige, very romantic flow.. peace and love1ManView
You're so damn succinct! I feel like this could just as easily be a lyric -- you could set it to music and it would still flow so perfectly, and not lose an ounce of meaning.
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hi cammila: what a great idea, I just may do that. thank you!
Beautiful love poem - left me quite, well...Anna :o]
hello anna: lovely to hear from you.
I like the physical feel of this poem. You do a good job of conveying passion.
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Ah, very nice! Leading with the heart is brave!
ReplyDeleteThere's some really beautiful aliteration in this poem. Quite lovely writing.
ReplyDelete~ Misky
http://miskmask.wordpress.com/2013/02/17/china-childrenmealtime-at-st-jeromes/
I think this is a pretty amazing love poem...so hard to write, usually so trite.
ReplyDeleteLike the knots and naked simmering ~
ReplyDeletehi tumblewords - thank you!
ReplyDeletehi miskmask {love this pen name} thank you.
ReplyDeletehi annel - thank you!
ReplyDeletehello heaven - nice to hear from you. thank you - i kind of like that line, also.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of nude limbs braided. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Paige. I would quote a favorite line, but they're all my favorite!
ReplyDeletebrenda: hi. thank you for your comment.
ReplyDeletejacqueZ: hello you. thank you so much for
ReplyDeletestopping by and for always supporting my poetry
and my various creative works.
Lovely creation paige, very romantic flow..
ReplyDeletepeace and love
1ManView
You're so damn succinct! I feel like this could just as easily be a lyric -- you could set it to music and it would still flow so perfectly, and not lose an ounce of meaning.
ReplyDeletehey 1manV: thank you for taking the time to comment.
ReplyDeletehi cammila: what a great idea, I just may do that. thank you!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful love poem - left me quite, well...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
hello anna: lovely to hear from you.
ReplyDeleteI like the physical feel of this poem. You do a good job of conveying passion.
ReplyDeleteHi Heidi: Thank you for reading another one of my poems.
ReplyDeletePlease return.