the heart understands all the inner parts of your soul... listen.
nicely done and thanks for sharing
vulnerable and valid ... loved the wordplay !!!
I like the idea of ponder this desire, a feeling of real vulnerability, very well done, i wish i had written that, :)
hi wayne: thank you and you are very welcome.
hi greeny! thank you and love what you havedone with your blog.
hello mametz: thank you for the fine compliment.please return.
You chose to emphasize the important words here and I like the compact delivery of a wise philosophy. Thanks for coming here to Poetry Jam and I hope you will return.
Makes me think about how complicated even the most simple and easy relationships can be.
tight little verse...the heft....then valid...they play well together around the vulnerable line.....
This really doesn't seem to have anything to do with the "stripes" prompt at Poetry Jam. Nor is Poetry Jam mentioned. I am going to remove your link. Perhaps you can write something that DOES apply.
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Hi Peggy thanks for your kind comments. This is actually for 3 word wednesday, that's why I have the 3 to link to 3 WW.However, again thanks so much for your comment.
Hi Brian: good to see you. Thank you.
Mary: If my link was included in Poetry Jamit should not have been. This is obviously a3 Word Wednesday poem, hence the bold 3 linking to3 WW. I probably just commented on someone'spoem, because I liked the poem.Please, by all means remove my link becauseI don't want it there - thanks so much.
Heidi: Hi! You are so right and thank you.
I love this, so succinct, "both of us vulnerable ~and valid." We forget this sometimes in our relationships,,,
ellecee: hi! yes, i feel that once each person becomes vulnerable and open in the relationship, each individual, as wellas the relationship becomes valid or true. thank you.
valid. yes. something we all too easily forget.
"Both of us vulnerable, and valid." - Powerful lines which evoked familiar emotions in me. Beautifully penned. Succinct and expressive. Keep it up.
hi shadow: I know we all desire to feel valid from the one we love.thank you.
hi E.Soul - thank you for your comment and thinking about my poem.