How beautiful and intimate. There is so much at play in the notion of a church -- both home and institution, both modest simplicity and baroque beauty, both collective and personal.
So I'm not surprised that you chose few words for this poem. You implied so much with so little.
Beautiful butterfly kisses!
ReplyDeletebutterfly lips ... wow :-)
ReplyDeleteI like it!
ReplyDeleteannel: hi thanks for the visit!
ReplyDeletegs. - loved your poem this week. thank you.
ReplyDeletestan: and I like that you let me know - thanks
ReplyDeleteVery nice and so concise, Paige.
ReplyDeletePamela
So sweet...
ReplyDeletehi pamela - thank you.
ReplyDeletehi laurie, thank you. your poem is lovely.
ReplyDelete'Tattered church' reminds me that church..worship is a moveable feast..not a cold stone building.. J x
ReplyDeletejae: for me I've noticed/felt that each church has her own
ReplyDeletepersonality and soul. thank you.
"I scatter butterfly lips on my lover's second heart"--this line really grabbed me. Beautiful poem, Paige
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and poignant,,,"curved to want" I like those words,,,
ReplyDeletejacque: hi. thank you so much for your comment Z.
ReplyDeleteellecee: hi there and thank you.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful and intimate. There is so much at play in the notion of a church -- both home and institution, both modest simplicity and baroque beauty, both collective and personal.
ReplyDeleteSo I'm not surprised that you chose few words for this poem. You implied so much with so little.
These words are all spirit..the church is within! lovely..
ReplyDeletehi cammila: thank you! I learn much from your insightful comments.
ReplyDeletehi lyn: thank you for the beautiful comment,
ReplyDelete"these words are all spirit" :}